African E-Mail Scammers Are LOL-ful

YOU TELL ME WHAT'S WRONG WITH THEIR APPROACH. I WILL PASTE THE EMAIL EXACTLY AS IT WAS.

Hello my Dearest.
My name is Joram from Liberia in West Africa ,5.3ft tall, dark in complexion,(never married before )and presently i am residing in the refugee camp here in Dakar as a result of the civil war that was fought in my country.My late father Dr Wilson Khalifa was the personal advicer to the former head of state before the rebels attacked our house one early morning and killed my mother and my father in cold .It was only me that is alive now and I managed to make my way to a near by country Senegal where i am leaving now.
I would like to know more about you.Your likes and dislikes,your hobbies and what you are doing presently.I will tell you more about myself in my next mail.Attached here is my picture and I will send another picture in my next mail.I will also like to see your picture.
Hoping to hear from you soonest
yours in love
Joram


SO BASICALLY SHE IS LIVING IN A REFUGEE CAMP HAVING PHOTOSHOOTS??? SMH.